Sunday, January 31, 2010

How'd you get to be Happiness?

i should be so happy right now.
I'm one step closer to pursuing the dream.
and you and you do this to me now.
how can you be so self consumed?
You know not what you do.
you've ruined it.
killed it.
left it out in the rain on a lonely mountain.


  1. Yes, you should be so happy right now and I hope you are again soon. I enjoyed the way you set up the sense of happiness as a possibility and then whisked it away. An excellent literary brain at work there, Lauren. Thanks for finding me, so that I could then find you.

    Take care, talented little star!

    Steph Fey x

  2. Oh thank you. Such nice words, from such a miserable piece.I believe you are the clever one.
    thanks to brightening my day
    Lauren x